Welcome to planet- nobody cares!
I would have called this place
Earth,
lest you all behaved like
earthlings!
In a population of 6.8 billion...
Please show me at
least one human being!!!
Exclaimed the devil (in everyone)
are you kidding!!?
This is nobody cares land!
Peoples' souls are made of dust and
sand!
Shocked when I figured,
The grey shades of people.
Growing up is not as easy as it
seems!
For broken toys and lost pencils
were better,
than broken hearts and lost
friends!
Use and throw, being the motto
Of everyone I know.
In trouble they play,
Knock knock, Who's there?
I say; it’s me, your fri-end!
Sorry pal, it's 'the end'!
Nobody cares if you are crying,
Nobody cares if you are dying,
Nobody cares if you are lonely on
the street
Or with family and friends on
a scrumptious treat!
When I'm gay,
Have seen on their face, dismay.
They dance in the rain,
When I’m in pain.
If you are sad,
It brightens them up.
They drive you mad,
By not turning up.
You text them with love and care,
And what do you get?
No reply! Or a mere 'K'!
Rediscovering every time,
That no one gives a damn..
Even the so called clan!
For me, it's so difficult and
painful, to 'not care'!
I guess I have to take this as a
dare!
Everytime life doesn't give you a
choice!
I guess this decision is something
I will forever rejoice!
Wearing a new outfit?
They are gonna, glare! :-P
You are beautiful?
Oh! They are gonna stare! ;-)
Green with jealousy
With their hearts black as char
Deep inside they'd...
Love to give you a scar!
They are like nomads,
Moving on with new people everyday.
To all such people, hear this:
You make me sick!
You better stop your cheap tricks!
They see you rise..
And sink like a ship..
Dear Lord!!!
Do tell me this!
Why have they become
Like this???
Where has humanity, compassion
and love gone?
Maybe it has distorted into
jealousy, hatred
and show off!!!
Testing my patience time and again,
All through my life
I have forgiven and forgotten and
loved even more,
Well, enough is enough! I can do no
more!
With the right people around..
Life is a fairy tale!
Else, get this straight!
It's not gonna be an easy sail!!
People with tainted characters,
I don't wanna know.
The world suddenly feels like
An awful place to grow!
7th June, 2012
I, at least, care to go through this post and leave my comment. Lol.
ReplyDelete"Wearing a new outfit?
They are gonna, glare! :-P
You are beautiful?
Oh! They are gonna stare! ;-)
Green with jealousy
With their hearts black as char
Deep inside they'd...
Love to give you a scar!"
This is a potential Rap lyric. ;-)
Good one. Keep going. We do care. :-P
Hahaa! Wow! I guess I have a back up profession that I can pursue! :P Being a lyricist! That too rap! :O :D
DeleteThanks a lot! :) :)
Beautiful rhyming, i just love a rhyming poem, great idea and amazing way with words!! N i know its a work of fiction but the underlying feeling is very very true.. i know a few people like this and if we compare list, we might get some common names!! As always --> A job well done sis!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks soooo much Kunal! :D
DeleteOh yeah we sure will get some common names! ;)
I liked it ...And whatever u have written is the bitter truth...But there are good people who really cares for everyone :):).I wanna ask u a question...You are beautiful?
ReplyDeleteOh! They are gonna stare! ;-)
Green with jealousy....These lines are for GIRLS na ...because boys always admire a beautiful girl ..and I can tell u ...it comes straight from heart ;).This para actually reminded me of Christina parry's Jar of hearts :D And again there is goodness in everyone and if we can see that.. earth will be an awesome place to grow :):)
Bitter truth it is! But ain't this also true? There are 2 kinds of guys: one who stares and one who admires! :P :P
DeleteYeah! Well, such kind of poems are sometimes written in a different mood, though it's true, it doesn't mean literally that the world is an 'awful' place to live in! Maybe just a portray of the truth, the world with a different perspective, loadsa free time and rhyming schemes! :P Haha!! :)
No matter what you do, what you be or how you behave, people will always keep framing their own opinions on you. So, there is no point in giving a rat's a** to people like that. If you see my fb wall you will occasionally find people who are quite pissed off with me and my updates :D But seriously, who cares? :)
ReplyDeleteSo I say, there is no point in trying to satisfy others, because it is IMPOSSIBLE. This world is a screwed up place. We are not born to please anybody else. In true sense, even friends don't exist in real. Trust me, Not even the closest of your friends can give you help as much as you need when your life is in dire straits. So it is better you help yourself and continue to remain what you are! In due course of time, destiny will decide who the REAL losers are. And when the judgement is done, you know that you will stand out from the crowd just for being yourself and not trying to be somebody else :)
Yes Vamsi! I will remember this forever! :)
DeleteGood one Divya! Apt for the times we live in. The friends we make are generally fair-weather friends, who like us as long as we're rich or helpful. We must learn to choose our friends properly! :)
ReplyDeleteYes! :) :) Thanks Ajay!
DeleteKnock knock, Who's there?
ReplyDeleteI say; it’s me, your fri-end!
Sorry pal, it's 'the end'!
u, me and everyone at some point have left out friends alone due to some reason or other. Some one said eh u are a stranger lets be that way, few say why me i am busy . . some times we feel just because we are not there, doesent mean they wont survive . Thing we forget is , that if others were there, u wouldnt be first person he she shared their problems with .
Well, clearly my poem is for people who are already 'friends', not acquaintances, maybe classmates or neighbours or colleagues at office or a relative; not any other category.
DeleteSecondly, the nature of the relationship and the degree of closeness determines what they share with each other(happiness/ sorrow/ day to day updates/ only important news etc.), so it depends on which two persons we are talking about!
Anyways, thanks for your take! Good day! :)
i really liked this one... and i can sorta relate this what's going on in my life (probably at the moment).. i guess such articles are like wake up calls to get my head straight.. and quoting Vamsi, " In true sense, even friends don't exist in real. Trust me, Not even the closest of your friends can give you help as much as you need when your life is in dire straits. So it is better you help yourself and continue to remain what you are! "
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Vamsi..
Thanks a lot divs for once again sharing such beautiful thoughts..
lots of love~
and, keep writing! :)
Awww! Thanks a lot Ranj!! :) Yes, it's sad but true! :-/
DeleteLove you too! <3 :D
whoaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!dis cool and awesum ...pardon me for reading it late ... m out of station ... bad network here ... in roaming too ... kip up d gud work ... I made my mum read dis one ... she loved it too :)
ReplyDeleteHehehe...Thanks dear... :) Glad that you and Aunty liked it! :)
DeleteExcept for the few people you can truly trust, ultimately it is you for yourself. Very true and well written. Love the rhyme sequence :)
ReplyDeleteYES!! :D ABSOLUTELY! :D Thanks Divz! <3
Deletevery true darling.... :)
ReplyDeletebest lines:-
For broken toys and lost pencils were better,
than broken hearts and lost friends!
but u should be glad that ppl do care atleast for u :P hehehehe...
they actually read ur blogs religiously... LOL :)...
mast jhakas writer ko my salute.....
sabse best best best line:-People with "tainted" characters
wow divi itni depth mei chali gaye tu toh :)....
keep up the good work sweetheart <3 !
Hehehe...Yeah 'some' people DO CARE :)
DeleteThanks a lot dearie!!! :)
Badhiya poem hai
ReplyDeleteDhanyawaad! :)
DeleteWell...yeah! thats the "naked" truth. No matter how people are around you, earth is still a beautiful place to live. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, Indeed :)
DeleteLol. The sad part is I have experienced 3/4 th of what you said.
ReplyDeleteAnd the happy part is, I stopped trusting people who is not worth it.
Only "I AM" remains trustworthy ;)
Excellent divya :)
Yes dear. True. We all learn with time. Thanks my dear :))
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